Sunday 12 May 2013

Year 5 Journalistic Writing

Year 5 have been looking at newspaper recounts. Look at some of the ones we have written.

Monster Mayhem!
In the early hours of Saturday morning, a beastly monster struck at a local school. Mrs Levy, the caretaker at Redlands Primary School, was cleaning and tidying a classroom when she appeared to see a mysterious shadow. The Police believe that the Monster was in search of food!

Mrs Levy (the eyewitness) got a horrible shock as she watched the beast stomp around the school destroying valuable items like awards and trophies. Mrs Levy hid in Class 10 and called the Police. She described the Monster as strange, worrying and that it had ‘eyes as red as tomato soup!’

Finally, after thirty minutes the Police arrived, they listened to Mrs Levy and she told them what had happened. The Police searched the premises for the Monster.
It took twelve officers to apprehend the beast. The Monster was charged with four offenses, one for breaking valuables. Luckily he has been put into prison for four months.
Do you think he will attack again?

By Hannah M


Monster Mayhem at Redlands School!
During the early hours of Saturday 13th April 2013, a Monster attacked a local school (Redlands Primary School). The incident started at 06:45am.Mrs Levy (The caretaker at Redlands) was cleaning class 11 when she spotted a mysterious creature. She thought it was a creature from Star wars or Lord of the rings. Mrs Levy stated that ‘It was a weird looking creature’.

The Monster came closer and closer to the building. ‘It has eyes as red as tomato soup’. First Mrs Levy secured all the windows and locked all the doors. Next she rang the Police immediately. Half an hour later the Police arrived.

It took twelve officers to take down the beast and arrest him. The Monster was charged with four offenses, one for burning a wall. The Police also found out that the beast was looking for children to eat.

Redlands Head teacher Mr Harcombe said “It was a shocking moment for Redlands, at least no one was injured”.

What do you think about this Monster?

By Ryan L


Monster Mayhem!!

In the early hours of Saturday morning, a Monster struck a local school.
Mrs Levy, who is the caretaker of Redlands Primary School, was peacefully cleaning class 11, when she spotted out of the darkness a horrifying shadow mysteriously appeared.
It was a MONSTER …

Some of the locals believe that it was trying to eat children!
Mrs Levy (The only eyewitness) said that it looked like a human sized Gollum out of The Lord of the rings. As quick as a lightning bolt she rang the Police and with luck they were there within 5 minutes.

The Police said that it took 12 officers to wrestle the beast to the ground. The chief commented on the event ‘The beast will be charged with 4 offences, including one of the worst ones – trying to eat children!!’

“As a result the beast will be behind tough, iron bars forever. Don’t worry no body is responsible and it will be behind bars forever!”

In an interview with the chief, he stated ‘This horror will never happen again’.
The Police are already making plans if the Monster tries to escape.

By Jon L

1 comment:

  1. I like your story about the monster its very interesting. I would like to know if he is still alive Jon.

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